Omar screams with fear. He sees the drone turn to him. There was only one place to go. In this marshy terrain its hard to walk let alone run on. The hills make it even harder as the only place he can go to without falling of is in that direction. The direction of the forbidden land. He knows this is bad he shouldve finished the mission when he had the chance. The drone has locked on to him it nows that this was the man who wanted to destroy it. He felt the end coming. He felt death but that doesnt mean hes giving up without a fight. He could see his friend flashing desperately to get catch the eye of the Drone and try take the Drone away from him. He lets out a shout of fear “Aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,” he did this because he was scared but also to warn his friend that he was still alive nd that he needed help but he doubted his friend heard him.
Still running he cant help but think of what went wrong when he fired the missile. He was pretty sure he aimed and fired the RPG precisely to attack the Drone but something went wrong. Something big. He needed to find out what went wrong he feels like if he found out he can make a big difference. In the meanwhile he needs to focus on running away from this matchine. “I need to get to Omar and get away from this this this devil of a creation.” He thought to himself as he ran down the hill taking him further and further away from Omar and from the village. He new he had to try and get rid of the Drone but how? He had an idea but it was a risky one. Was it worth it? To sacrifice his life in hope that it stops the Drone from going into the village and causing mayhem. There was no time to think now, it was do or die.
He started to run to the right where he new there was an abandoned warehouse with another RPG for him to have one last chance to take it down. The only problem was that this warehouse was a few kilometres away. Would he be able to run that far without letting the Drone catch him. He might as well try there is no other way to get out of this situation. Dashing rapidly across the ground he realised hes never been to this area and actually takes a moment to admire the surroundings. The lovely lush flowers surrounding the calm gentle lake. He never really new why this area is forbidden it seems all calm until he sees a few people in the distance wearing army like clothes and then for a moment, just a small little moment he sees the Drone hesitate for that one second and then he realises hes made a mistake but its too late to turn back now.
He sees the warehouse now just in front of him. Hes been running for quite a while but it seems like he hasnt wasted any energy now. He thinks to himself “This must be adrenaline.” As he closes in on the ware house he spots a flag directly on top of it. It reads “Against Nato” and for once he understands why this area was shut down. This was where all the terrorists were. This is the place which Nato have been looking for all along. He realises why this area is forbidden but its too late to turn back now. Entering the warehouse he sees the Drone follow him but his first action is to pause and take in the horrendus smell of amo and gun powder. This is were all the artillery was. Around him was a musty old buildingthat looks like it might collapse. Its dark, dusty and covered with spider webs. There are beams of light shooting through the cracked windows also there were containers contaminated with grafiti. “This really is just an old abandoned warehouse,” he said to himself, but there was no time to think about these things. Without a moment hesitation he jumped onto the table with the RPG. He had one shot and one shot only…
As he tried to ready up the shot he felt the Drone closing in so using his natural instinct he just shot. At first it was looking like a complete failiure of a shot but not after long the missile curved to face the drone head on. Excitedly he spat “Ive done it,” but the Drone said something of its own “Anti missile defense mechanism on.” Then and there he new what this meant. It meant the missiles were unstoppabble. It meant they were doomed. As the Drone was just seconds away from smashing into him he saw his friend at the door. He mouthed something to him. He said “Im sorry.” With a smile on his face the Drone crashed into Jake. His time was up!

June 14, 2016 at 1:52 pm
Excellent point of view here Mohamed. The choice of the boys is a thought provoking perspective.
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